Every Story Needs A Start: Part 3EVERY STORY NEEDS A START PART 3By Lesssertuba37316Days passed, minutes quickly dissolved Sparky, and Reni laid asleep in the same ER room. Nedak watched, and guarded as they slept."If they don't wake up, I'll have to take care of yami alone." Nedak said. Rainbow Dash scooted closer to him, "You don't have to fight alone. You got us."As they stared deep into each others eyes. Pinkie Pie stood on the edge of Reni's bed. while Applejack, stood near Sparky. He started to fidget. Applejack's eyes, and body started to with hope,and joy. He rose, yawning and
Every Story Needs A Start: Part 1Every Story Needs a Start Part 1 By Lessertuba37316It was morning at Sweetapple Acres, and in a clearing were 3 pegasi, and a unicorn laid pasurrounded in a clearing surrounded by apple trees. The tallest one, Spark K. Lionheart, was the first to wake. Floating in and out of consciousness. He drifted toward a small water puddle.He started to wake. "Where am I?" He looked down. Noticing his feet weren't feet, but hoofs instead."And what happened to my feet." finally realizing where he was, his eyes widened. He could feel his boy and heart fill with excitement."I'm in Equestria!"He shouted, as he looked all around him noticing
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